Father’s love glitters enticingly like shards of glass. Reach out, poor little boy. Father reeks of love, for mother, for baby, for the liquid that consumes. Big brother has flown, anger in his wake. Draw back, poor little boy.
He’s eight years old and he’s rushing home from school in his uniform, his lunch bag tucked tightly under his arm. Because he stoops when he walks, the first thing he sees of brother are his shoes. He tries to step around them but a solid forearm contacts at the level of his chest. He pushes against it but it doesn’t budge.
“He’s home,” brother says.
“Where’s mom?” asks boy.
“Home too.”
Boy, more determined than ever, attempts to get around brother. This time he is held back by a hand, painfully grasping his arm.
“You can’t,” says brother.
“No, you can’t,” boy says bravely, stupidly, because he knows what is coming.
In broad daylight, with cars passing on the quiet street on the way home from school, brother passes on father’s lesson to boy.
Disclaimer: This story (and series) is semi-fictional, and is in no way connected to persons alive nor dead. Apart from certain facts, it is a product of the author’s imagination.
January 30, 2014 at 2:35 am
So sad and so painfully true of life.beautifully put
Thanks for sharing a home truth that all too often is ignored. Abuse breeds abuse. xx
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January 30, 2014 at 6:02 am
Thanks, Willow.
It does. I’ll be posting the rest of the story over the coming weeks on my fiction blog. I hope you’ll follow along. 🙂
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January 29, 2014 at 11:05 pm
Wow!
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January 29, 2014 at 11:27 pm
Thank you, Lee-Anne. 🙂 I’ll be posting the rest of the series starting tomorrow on my fiction blog. I’m surprised this showed up suddenly – it’s a year old.
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March 28, 2013 at 9:30 pm
I am finally starting this story…..from the beginning. I am already looking forward to the next one….and the next….and the next.
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March 28, 2013 at 9:32 pm
Well thank you for reading. 🙂 At least they’re short 😛
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March 28, 2013 at 9:35 pm
Short…but draws a vivid picture with your chosen words.
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March 28, 2013 at 9:37 pm
Mmm yeah. The whole thing was an experiment in less is more. It was fun to write 🙂
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