Cold and white, flurries muffle the air like clouds of frigid dust. Hurry on, persistent child. Wind stings, raw, bitter, like father’s loving caress. Abstain, willful young man.
Brother throws his keys on the table just inside the door and shakes the snow from the shoulders of his jacket as he takes it off. He goes to the kitchen to find boy sitting at the table, drawing a picture by the dim afternoon light.
“How’s mom?” asks boy.
“It was a miscarriage,” answers brother.
Boy looks up at brother and narrows his eyes.
“You wouldn’t know, you weren’t there!” brother disclaims.
Boy goes back to his drawing.
“What are you making?” brother asks.
“Nothing,” boy answers.
Brother peers over boy’s shoulder to behold a well detailed account of the previous night. Father stands over shattered mother, his mouth agape, his fist raised. Brother cowers, twitching in the corner, his knees to his chin. Below the drawing boy has written, ‘Father’s Love‘.
Brother, snatching away the drawing, shreds it with his teeth before eating it.
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Disclaimer: This story (and series) is semi-fictional, and is in no way connected to persons alive nor dead. Apart from certain facts, it is a product of the author’s imagination.
February 10, 2014 at 10:59 am
Linda this is eating me like the brother ate the drawing ! this did not happen to you , did it, no please no.
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February 10, 2014 at 2:22 pm
No, it didn’t happen to me. It’s semi-fictional, but it’s about a famous person who has spoken about his upbringing in interviews. I’ve filled in the blanks with fiction – but his lyrics speak for themselves where his confessions leave off. I’m considering doing a post at the end of this series to reveal where I got the material from to write this.
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February 10, 2014 at 3:04 pm
Well what ever and who ever you are really doing you justice! xxxxxxx
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February 10, 2014 at 3:21 pm
Thank you 🙂
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April 9, 2013 at 1:08 pm
Oh is this a true story? 😦 that’s sad 😦 hope it ends well!
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April 9, 2013 at 1:10 pm
It is and it isn’t. It’s a story that I know of but that I fictionalized the details to.
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April 9, 2013 at 1:16 pm
…and yes, it ends well! 🙂
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April 9, 2013 at 12:56 pm
Sad, and again so beautifully narrated …… one wants to hold the boy and comfort him …….. and I wish I could see that drawing, “Father’s Love” the description makes me want to see it …..
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April 9, 2013 at 1:07 pm
Parts of this were difficult to write because of the truth of it. Thank you for letting me know I was adequate in telling the true story. 🙂
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