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Thirteen Idolized Man

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The lights, the lights, like mother’s love burn through retina and numb the brain. Drink them in, precious boy. Screams of adoration oppress and uplift, confusing like family’s comforting reassurance. Float, young man.

Man drops his key card on the table inside the door of his hotel suite, his music echoes in his ears. He turns to his chosen one and bends to press his mouth against hers. His desire radiates heat through his body. His chosen leaps up, legs around his waist, her sweet scent reaches his taste buds. Man carries her to the bed. She knows what he wants. She has been his before.

“The sword is beside the bed,” man says.

Man lays back and his chosen slides from his lap to retrieve the katana he occasionally uses, like a benediction, to shave his face. She hands it to him and with a smile and a shink! he unsheathes the weapon.  He drops the scabbard to the floor and rests the sword on the bed above his head while she undresses him.

“Do you love me as I love you?” man asks.

“More,” his chosen whispers.

She crawls up his body to take the weapon.

Man closes his eyes. The lights and the roar of the crowd pierce his memory as he hungrily anticipates the inspiration of a fresh scar.


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Disclaimer: This story (and series) is semi-fictional, and is in no way connected to persons alive nor dead. Apart from certain facts, it is a product of the author’s imagination.

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Author: Linda G. Hill

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2 thoughts on “Thirteen Idolized Man

  1. wilsonkhoo's avatar

    The ‘shink!’ seems a little out of place. Too loud for such a smooth passage.

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      Hmmm… I did consider a swish, but the sharp sound of the ‘shink!’ seemed more to represent the adrenaline connected to the danger of having a weapon in the bedroom.

      I do see your point though. Perhaps it would have been better to raise the paragraph to the level of the sound, being that I’m pretty attached to the ‘shink!’. 😉

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