Life in progress

Fourteen Stirring Mother

4 Comments

Home breathes, love pours comfort into cups of fine gleaming china. Catch the scent, dear woman. Steam rises in clouds of humidity, obscuring the impenetrable essence of life. Smell the coffee, tiresome bitch.

Mother smiles, watching her men at the kitchen table. Father and son laugh and drink to the joys of life and the trials of marriage. The aroma of bread baking in the oven turns her attention to the clock. Father senses her concentration.

“Where is the little shit now?” asks father.

“He should be here soon,” replies mother.

Man opens the front door as though on cue. The cat yowls as man trips over it.

Brother stands, knocking over his chair. He charges out of the kitchen, mother in his wake.

“I’mm sorry, mmother,” slurs man.

“He’s fucked up on drugs!” brother jeers.

Mother extends a hand to help man rise to his feet. Brother leers and kicks man’s unsteady legs from beneath him. Man slips back to the floor.

Father staggers from the kitchen to assist and mother stands back. Hands at her face she incredulously attends the thrashing of her youngest child. She jumps as the bell in the kitchen signals the readiness of the bread.

Emancipated, mother concerns herself with the rising of the bread and her concern over the immeasurable appetite of the three men near the front door.


To go to the beginning of this series click here

To Fifteen click here

Disclaimer: This story (and series) is semi-fictional, and is in no way connected to persons alive nor dead. Apart from certain facts, it is a product of the author’s imagination.

Unknown's avatar

Author: Linda G. Hill

There's a writer in here, clawing her way out.

4 thoughts on “Fourteen Stirring Mother

  1. wilsonkhoo's avatar

    Your writing is honestly, very very smooth. It just flows endlessly. How about trying a longer piece to see how the style stands.

    Like

  2. Dark Dee's avatar

    Eek wow.
    First…the opener – love it. ‘tiresome bitch’ packs a wallop of surprise. Makes you wonder who the narrator is.
    Then, these men. What a party to be around. Man comes home and he’s instantly assaulted – just another day for poor Mother. I don’t imagine bread will satisfy this kind of appetite.
    Chilling.

    Like

Leave a reply to D. Hartley Cancel reply

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.