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Reading and Writing – is it ‘Rithmatic?

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It all started with my romance writing course. The course was a requisite to acquiring the college certificate I’m after and I thought it would be fun to do anyway. Just to get a feel for the genre I went in search of novels to read that would cost me little or no money. Enter the freebies on my e-reader. Out of the ten or so I downloaded, two were well written – the rest, not so much. But I read them anyway. It was the general feeling I was going after, not the quality of writing.

At the same time I was finishing up the rough draft of my novel. That done, I started the editing process. In the meantime, the romance course finished and I went back to reading what I normally read. Well. I tell you.

After reading Stephen King (who, no matter whether you enjoy his stories or not, you must admit is a master of the craft of writing) I realised that my novel was right on par with the free romance crap I had been reading! Granted, I’m taking a grammar course now, so I’m finding mistakes I didn’t know were mistakes. But I still want to rewrite my entire manuscript.

I was amazed at how much influence what I read had on what I wrote. The time I spent describing things in minute detail instead of simply relating how my characters were reacting to things; the extra word count that came from blathering on about things that don’t matter is astounding.

I still have to cut down my word count by about 40,000 words in order for it to fit into even the most generous publisher’s limits, but I’m hoping with Stephen King’s influence I’ll be able to accomplish that. And from now on I must remember to keep away from authors I’m not interested in emulating whilst I write.

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Author: Linda G. Hill

There's a writer in here, clawing her way out.

33 thoughts on “Reading and Writing – is it ‘Rithmatic?

  1. This Dad Thinks's avatar

    You know, there’s a very similar philosophy with photography… if you immerse yourself in poor photography, that’s what you will end up shooting!

    Surround yourself with positive influences, and let THOSE affect you instead!

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  2. pibbsdreamquest's avatar

    Have you ever thought about joining a writing group? We found it very beneficial and had any of our manuscripts been complete they would have been more than willing to take it home and read it. Since ours was a ‘work in beginning stages’ we just stuck with the meeting format of bringing a copy, for everyone in the group, of 5 pages which we then read aloud and they critiqued/edited as they read along. Then everyone took turns talking about what had just been read. Then we would move on to the next member and repeat the process. We learned so much. It was fantastic.
    k-

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  3. Patti Singleton's avatar

    That was an informative post…showing the way you dealt with the whole process. I like your honesty.
    The way the publishing biz is changing practically daily, I’m waiting until I get much closer to finishing before I make the decision which way to go with publishing.
    Why not split your book into halves or thirds? Just a thought. I was over 200 k and that is what I did (am doing).
    Good luck. Hope to see more progress updates.

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      Thank you 🙂 I did consider splitting my novel up, but I don’t think there are any climaxes in the middle that would be enough to make the reader want to keep going… I don’t know, maybe I’m just too close to the story, or simply not confident enough. What I really need is for someone else to read it who knows about editing.

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      • Patti Singleton's avatar

        It will be probably be the same amount of work, because you have to create beg/mid/end for each book, I just think creation would be better than deletion.
        “They” say having another book up your sleeve really helps sells first.
        It will prob be Oct before I get done with this gardening marathon, but after that I could offer to read and help with ideas…I’m not a professional, but I know that I could be of some help.
        Good luck!
        Patti

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  4. pibbsdreamquest's avatar

    We had an agent once come to our writing group as a guest speaker. She made it very clear that any book that you self publish will have a much harder time getting picked up by a traditional publisher. It’s not to say that it will never happen but the instance is so rare that the odds may as well be zero.

    You might want to check into how true her claim was before making a decison to self publish. I can’t speak as the voice of experience as I have never published any of my writing, but it seemed something that might be important to share.
    k- of k&p Catalano
    http://pibbsdreamquest.com

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  5. Bruce Goodman's avatar

    Wowowow! That is fantastic! Where do you find the time? How do you muster the enthusiasm? Where does this terrific commitment come from? It’s wonderful, and I find it an inspiration. Thanks!

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      Finding the time is the worst – I write whenever I can. The enthusiasm came with Nanowrimo, and I suppose the commitment started there as well. Once I was fully into the swing of writing this thing, it carried me all by itself.
      Happy I can be an inspiration!

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  6. Dark Dee's avatar

    Perhaps now you can see why I kept telling you I would prefer to read it after you edited it. This is good and interesting news, Linda.

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  7. Charles Yallowitz's avatar

    I’ve always been confused by word limits by publishers. If it’s a great story then the word count shouldn’t matter.

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  8. Paul Davis's avatar

    What is your word count? I couldn’t even imagine cutting 40k words (though if I were going through normal publishing means I’d likely have to).

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