Twins. Part of the plot in my NaNoWriMo project required a case of mistaken identity, so instead of having one protagonist, I’m writing one and a half. I call the twins “one and a half” protagonists because I’m writing in the first person – so I’m getting all of what one of them thinks and only half of what the other does. They’re both good guys, Marcel and Max are. Decent men from a good family – very much the same in many ways.
As usual, something happened in real life which made me contemplate the differences between siblings. In this case it was a conversation with the lady who manages the dry cleaner on my paper route. She has two granddaughters who she loves to talk about. She was telling me how unalike they are, even though they’re very close in age. This is a subject (among many) that has always fascinated me, being an only child. My own children didn’t grow up as siblings usually do, since they all have such physical differences, so it’s something I must study from a distance.
The difficulty I’m experiencing in my novel is that the twins, Marcel and Max, sound the same when they speak. It makes sense to me that they should, but they end up coming out like these guys:
Not all that polite mind you, but they speak exactly alike.
Once NaNo is done and I can put some thought into it, I’ll work on finding something unique about the two, which will come out in their speech. But in the meantime, I’m wondering what about their natures, and not their nurture, can help my readers to tell them apart.
Have you ever written siblings and come across this problem? Let’s learn from each other!

November 23, 2013 at 11:06 pm
I haven’t written siblings as main characters, but my current WIPs has three female cousins who were practically raised as siblings. It’s challenging because they have to have a lot of the same life experiences and yet be different people. Anyway, your post reminded of an interesting true story: I work with a guy who has a speech impediment. He stutters a bit and mispronounces words frequently but not so often that he can’t be understood. Anyway, he has a distinctive “accent” because of all this. And he has a twin, who I have not met, but other people in my office have met. His twin talks exactly the same way. Someone told me that sometimes (maybe often) one twin will take on the characteristics of another twin if they are initially different. In this case, one twin may have the ability to speak “normally” but he doesn’t because he emulating his brother. Makes for a nice twist if you’re writing about twins.
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November 24, 2013 at 10:31 am
That is very interesting, thanks Marie. I’m not sure if I want to keep my twins having the same voice or not. I think maybe I need just a subtle difference. Your story has confirmed that for me, in a way. 🙂
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November 24, 2013 at 1:37 pm
Glad I could help 🙂
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November 24, 2013 at 4:43 pm
🙂
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November 22, 2013 at 9:25 pm
Linda, I’ve nominated you for an award 🙂
http://suzjones.wordpress.com/2013/11/23/another-award-my-cup-runneth-over/
Have an awesome day.
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November 22, 2013 at 11:24 pm
Thanks very much, Sue 🙂 I’ll check it out!
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November 22, 2013 at 8:28 pm
I’ve written siblings, but I have yet to come across this problem. Ha, maybe because they weren’t twins!
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November 22, 2013 at 8:50 pm
Maybe I need to do some research on twins, eh? I’m sure there must be some at the NaNo forums.
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November 22, 2013 at 7:31 pm
I have two characters that have the same father in my story, possibly the same mother too I’ve never discussed their mother(s) because it wasn’t pertinent to the story… sometimes I wonder if all my characters don’t kind of blend together in a homogenous gelatinous blob..
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November 22, 2013 at 7:35 pm
Yeah, that’s where sometimes I find I need another set of eyes to look at my work, to tell me these things. It doesn’t help though unless they’re brutally honest.
I do think your characters are probably more than a blob though, even without reading. What I’ve seen of your work, you’re pretty good at defining characters. 🙂
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November 22, 2013 at 7:41 pm
My story is actually absent of a main character and revolves around a host of about 20 characters two of whom I’ve already killed… it’s difficult dealing with so many characters to give them all a uniqueness…
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November 22, 2013 at 7:50 pm
Yep, I’ve been there. Especially whilst keeping up with NaNo’s pace. I see you’re doing better than I am though! 🙂
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November 22, 2013 at 7:53 pm
a chapter a day keeps the doctor away… but I’m still a chapter behind technically having written the grand total of 60 words on chapter 22 so far… 🙂 no real notes and lots of stuff to remember…
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November 22, 2013 at 7:58 pm
Do you think you might actually have to go back and edit this one?
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November 22, 2013 at 8:32 pm
other than the odd typo or spelling mistake… nope… confident you could hand it to your Prof
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November 22, 2013 at 8:53 pm
And not a single plot hole, eh? I know mine’s full of them, but if I start going back now, I’ll never finish. And then there’s that pesky gopher thing…
Indubitably.
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November 22, 2013 at 4:52 pm
Sometimes twins are portrayed as identical. Usually it’s more effective in a visual media, I’ve never seen it done in writing, but I’m also not as well written as a writer likely ought be. Siblings are almost always support characters in my stories, like true, back of the house, support characters. Usually they only show what “normal” is. Do you really feel the need to make them sound different when they speak?
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November 22, 2013 at 4:57 pm
I do, only because they REALLY remind me of the Looney Toons gophers. But then again, the novel is coming out a bit comical, so maybe it’s not really a bad thing…
I think the only book I’ve read where identical twins were used as main characters is “Dead Ringers.” It was a movie too. I can see how siblings can show what’s normal – as long as they have a normal relationship – in the way they can bounce your story off one another. Food for thought. Thanks Paul. 🙂
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