It all started with my romance writing course. The course was a requisite to acquiring the college certificate I’m after and I thought it would be fun to do anyway. Just to get a feel for the genre I went in search of novels to read that would cost me little or no money. Enter the freebies on my e-reader. Out of the ten or so I downloaded, two were well written – the rest, not so much. But I read them anyway. It was the general feeling I was going after, not the quality of writing.
At the same time I was finishing up the rough draft of my novel. That done, I started the editing process. In the meantime, the romance course finished and I went back to reading what I normally read. Well. I tell you.
After reading Stephen King (who, no matter whether you enjoy his stories or not, you must admit is a master of the craft of writing) I realised that my novel was right on par with the free romance crap I had been reading! Granted, I’m taking a grammar course now, so I’m finding mistakes I didn’t know were mistakes. But I still want to rewrite my entire manuscript.
I was amazed at how much influence what I read had on what I wrote. The time I spent describing things in minute detail instead of simply relating how my characters were reacting to things; the extra word count that came from blathering on about things that don’t matter is astounding.
I still have to cut down my word count by about 40,000 words in order for it to fit into even the most generous publisher’s limits, but I’m hoping with Stephen King’s influence I’ll be able to accomplish that. And from now on I must remember to keep away from authors I’m not interested in emulating whilst I write.
August 3, 2013 at 8:42 pm
You know, there’s a very similar philosophy with photography… if you immerse yourself in poor photography, that’s what you will end up shooting!
Surround yourself with positive influences, and let THOSE affect you instead!
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August 4, 2013 at 7:51 pm
You’d better stay away from my photography then. Haha!
I’m finding that is excellent advice indeed. Thanks for the comment, Andrew 😀
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August 3, 2013 at 8:47 am
Have you ever thought about joining a writing group? We found it very beneficial and had any of our manuscripts been complete they would have been more than willing to take it home and read it. Since ours was a ‘work in beginning stages’ we just stuck with the meeting format of bringing a copy, for everyone in the group, of 5 pages which we then read aloud and they critiqued/edited as they read along. Then everyone took turns talking about what had just been read. Then we would move on to the next member and repeat the process. We learned so much. It was fantastic.
k-
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August 3, 2013 at 10:19 am
That sounds like a great idea. I’m part of a critiquing group but it’s online, and very slow-going.
Thanks for the suggestion!
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August 3, 2013 at 12:48 am
That was an informative post…showing the way you dealt with the whole process. I like your honesty.
The way the publishing biz is changing practically daily, I’m waiting until I get much closer to finishing before I make the decision which way to go with publishing.
Why not split your book into halves or thirds? Just a thought. I was over 200 k and that is what I did (am doing).
Good luck. Hope to see more progress updates.
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August 3, 2013 at 8:39 am
Thank you 🙂 I did consider splitting my novel up, but I don’t think there are any climaxes in the middle that would be enough to make the reader want to keep going… I don’t know, maybe I’m just too close to the story, or simply not confident enough. What I really need is for someone else to read it who knows about editing.
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August 3, 2013 at 3:22 pm
It will be probably be the same amount of work, because you have to create beg/mid/end for each book, I just think creation would be better than deletion.
“They” say having another book up your sleeve really helps sells first.
It will prob be Oct before I get done with this gardening marathon, but after that I could offer to read and help with ideas…I’m not a professional, but I know that I could be of some help.
Good luck!
Patti
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August 3, 2013 at 6:14 pm
Thanks very much for the offer. By the time you’re ready, I might be too, so I might take you up on it. 🙂
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August 2, 2013 at 6:24 pm
We had an agent once come to our writing group as a guest speaker. She made it very clear that any book that you self publish will have a much harder time getting picked up by a traditional publisher. It’s not to say that it will never happen but the instance is so rare that the odds may as well be zero.
You might want to check into how true her claim was before making a decison to self publish. I can’t speak as the voice of experience as I have never published any of my writing, but it seemed something that might be important to share.
k- of k&p Catalano
http://pibbsdreamquest.com
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August 2, 2013 at 6:52 pm
Thanks very much, that is most definitely useful info.
🙂
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August 2, 2013 at 4:00 pm
Good luck Hun!
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August 2, 2013 at 5:41 pm
Thank you my dear!
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August 2, 2013 at 5:58 pm
😉
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August 2, 2013 at 3:43 pm
Wowowow! That is fantastic! Where do you find the time? How do you muster the enthusiasm? Where does this terrific commitment come from? It’s wonderful, and I find it an inspiration. Thanks!
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August 2, 2013 at 5:48 pm
Finding the time is the worst – I write whenever I can. The enthusiasm came with Nanowrimo, and I suppose the commitment started there as well. Once I was fully into the swing of writing this thing, it carried me all by itself.
Happy I can be an inspiration!
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August 2, 2013 at 3:33 pm
Perhaps now you can see why I kept telling you I would prefer to read it after you edited it. This is good and interesting news, Linda.
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August 2, 2013 at 3:51 pm
Yes, that bad. I know. 😛
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August 2, 2013 at 3:28 pm
I’ve always been confused by word limits by publishers. If it’s a great story then the word count shouldn’t matter.
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August 2, 2013 at 3:31 pm
I agree. And there are rare exceptions for first-time authors to be published even with huge word-counts. But I’m told by so many people that I shouldn’t even bother trying…
Having said that, if I self-publish the lot of it is going back in!
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August 2, 2013 at 3:40 pm
There is a big wall to get over with publishing, but it doesn’t hurt to try. I think the system is changing with the popularity of indie authors. Companies and agents might be looking for popular series and authors through those mediums instead of dealing with query letters. Most companies that I tried to talk to over the last 10+ years required an agent too.
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August 2, 2013 at 3:54 pm
So, what you’re saying is, e-publish first and then look for a publishing deal, rather than the other way around?
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August 2, 2013 at 4:02 pm
Personally, I would try for publishing first for a bit just to see if luck is on your side. Then e-publish and continue submitting when you find an opening.
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August 2, 2013 at 5:42 pm
That’s what I was going to do… though I’d probably have given up after e-pub’ing. Thanks for the advice 🙂
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August 2, 2013 at 5:51 pm
I have. I’m waiting for someone to come to me.
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August 2, 2013 at 5:53 pm
We should all start our own WordPress publishing house.
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August 2, 2013 at 6:06 pm
That’s so crazy it would work. Or maybe a blog that lists ebooks with their sales links. The author can put the post together how he or she sees fit. No idea how to do this.
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August 2, 2013 at 6:11 pm
Definitely something to think about. I’m not very savvy as far as WP goes, so if you want to mention it to your friends who are…
I would imagine an actual publishing house would require some capital.
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August 2, 2013 at 6:14 pm
It would, but an advertising site wouldn’t cost anything. Not sure who has the time and know how to do this.
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August 2, 2013 at 6:51 pm
I’ll think about it, research it, and let you know what I come up with.
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August 2, 2013 at 3:22 pm
What is your word count? I couldn’t even imagine cutting 40k words (though if I were going through normal publishing means I’d likely have to).
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August 2, 2013 at 3:29 pm
I’m currently just under 190,000, which is already down from 213,000.
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August 2, 2013 at 3:36 pm
And only 40k?! 😛 Wow, mine was 100k.
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August 2, 2013 at 3:50 pm
The highest word count I’ve seen accepted in any publisher’s submission guidelines is 140k. I’m going for that. If I can get it lower, all the better.
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