A first world problem has arisen. It was bound to happen. Because I have some experience in writing short stories, I’m kinda ahead of the class. We’re learning, at the moment, terminology such as character, setting, conflict, theme, point of view, and narrative unity. Not to toot my own horn, but most of this stuff I already manage without thinking about it.
So our first major assignment is to write a first draft of a short story. We’ll be marked on the above points. Fine, no problem so far. I am, however, having a problem with the second major assignment. Why, you ask? Because we have yet to learn about ‘style.’ In the second assignment we must fix what the professor tells us we need fixing – which is the first half of the mark – but then we need to apply to our story what we have yet to learn about style and writing in our own voice. The problem is, I don’t know how to write, not using my own voice and style in the first place, so that I have something to be marked.
I’ve thought about trying to write the first draft in someone else’s style, but I know I’ll be so unhappy with it I won’t be able to hand it in.
What to do…what to do…?
October 14, 2013 at 3:04 pm
I have NO IDEA what you’re talking about. I just bribed my teachers or threatened to beat them up. LOL!!
I know nothing about structures, style, conflicts, etc., But i can tell you this: Write what you think. Make yourself laugh or cry while you write, and it will be felt by your readers.
Your style should be….yours
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October 14, 2013 at 3:34 pm
I don’t know how well that would work, threatening to beat up my professor. I don’t even know what town she lives in, let alone where she works from. It’s an online course! haha
Again, Trey, you’re right. You can’t touch your readers if you don’t feel it yourself.
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October 13, 2013 at 9:05 pm
Sad that you have to be perplexed in trying to figure a strategy for grades. I would give it your best shot and then work the next step.
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October 13, 2013 at 9:30 pm
It does seem a little sad, doesn’t it? Then again, if I didn’t know what was coming, I wouldn’t be going through this. 😛
That’s probably the best idea. Thanks for your input, John 🙂
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October 13, 2013 at 7:08 pm
sorry Linda had to chuckle a little when I read this… I could imagine your teacher having fits with me… seeing as I only write one draft to begin with… I would say just write like you write and deal with the second assignment when it’s time to…
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October 13, 2013 at 7:19 pm
That’s okay, Tim. I’m always happy to get a laugh. 🙂
I’m thinking that’s the way I’ll go. Just write it as I would, in my own style, and see if she finds fault with it when I resubmit the second draft in the same style. 😛
And yeah, she would have fun with you. You’re such a rebel. Haha!
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October 14, 2013 at 12:02 am
I second this! Believe me, as an older student and set in my ways, being qualified to evaluate the way my professors do – oh boy was I always in trouble!! Just write – trouble will find you if it’s necessary. 🙂 Happy dilemmas to you!!!!
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October 14, 2013 at 9:54 am
Haha! Thank you! One way or another I know I’m going to pass it – I have no worries there, and in fact I really shouldn’t be worrying at all. It’s my OCD taking charge. I want to get 100%, damnit!
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October 14, 2013 at 10:23 am
More power to you!!! Great luck!
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October 14, 2013 at 10:54 am
Thank you! I don’t think anyone has ever wished me great luck before! 😀
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October 14, 2013 at 10:57 am
🙂
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October 14, 2013 at 11:10 am
I want you to be victorious. If I knew how to insert an evil grin emoticon, it’d be here…
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October 14, 2013 at 11:14 am
I appreciate the thought. 😀
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October 13, 2013 at 6:55 pm
Okay I think I got this figured out, I didn’t understand at first so I had to read it a couple of times and the comments helped. I think you’re being too meta, in D&D we call it meta gaming. If I understand this correctly the idea is to write a short story but it is a rough draft, so no edits (except for grammar possibly) even if that annoys you
(it would annoy me).
The professor wants to see your raw work and then from there the professor will go through and mark up things that he/she thinks is your style and areas where you perhaps strayed from your style. These two assignments are not about the story at all but about taking feedback, how to apply it and how other people might see your style differently than you do.
Hope I made sense, lol. It actually sounds like some good assignments.
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October 13, 2013 at 7:16 pm
As I just commented to Charles, it’s going to be tough not to correct everything from the beginning.
Thinking about it this way, it will be interesting. I need to make sure it’s not perfect to start with, but then again I can’t stray too far or I won’t get the marks I need.
I’ll let you know how it goes. 🙂
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October 13, 2013 at 6:23 pm
Write the way you always write. To do otherwise might make you appear messy and lead you on the path to a style you don’t like.
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October 13, 2013 at 7:09 pm
That’s exactly what I’m afraid of. I just hope there’s something left to mark by the end of the course. I’m already going to have a hard time submitting a first draft – I hate anything not to be perfect. 😛
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October 13, 2013 at 7:24 pm
What would be wrong with there being nothing left to mark by the end? You can’t be failed for getting it right, can you?
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October 13, 2013 at 7:28 pm
That’s the thing… I don’t know?
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October 13, 2013 at 5:59 pm
Write it – submit it – listen to the feedback – throw a Mozart-like temper exclaiming your work is perfection – refuse to change a single note – –
Not that this is good advice – but it IS an option – and what is life without options?
😀
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October 13, 2013 at 6:54 pm
True, true. I’m going to read your post now. 🙂 Thanks for mentioning me!
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October 13, 2013 at 5:31 pm
I always hated style. What exactly is it? I get the rest (maybe a little fuzzy on narrative unity), but style was always a little strange to me. Is it voice? Hope you’re having fun in the class! Those beginning parts really seem like a “beginner’s guide to writing.”
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October 13, 2013 at 6:53 pm
It really is a beginners course in many ways, but it was necessary for me to take it to get my certificate. It is fun – it’s a challenge, albeit for the wrong reasons. 😛
Style is how you discern one writer from another. Almost like an accent. You can put one on, but it won’t feel natural. If you think of it this way, it is your voice. In essence, it’s the way you speak when you write.
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October 13, 2013 at 7:33 pm
So style is voice?
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October 13, 2013 at 7:46 pm
I suppose so, yes. But, according to my course, style is defined by use of language (flowery or everyday) lengths of sentences and paragraphs, as well as the voice the reader hears when s/he is reading your work. It’s all part and parcel of what is considered style.
Make sense? 😛
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October 13, 2013 at 8:04 pm
I know my truth! 😉 I do not miss the whole having to tell a professor what they want to hear to pass the class. It’s nice being able to know what something is without labeling it. Labelists!
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October 13, 2013 at 8:09 pm
Haha! Maybe I should teach a class. 😛
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October 13, 2013 at 4:55 pm
I agree with howanxious. Just write the jolly thing the way you always do. You don’t know yet what demands the professor is going to make exactly regarding “style” because he hasn’t told you yet. You don’t have to give the results of a scientific experiment BEFORE the experiment. Same for this: just do the first assignment and worry about the second assignment when it happens.
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October 13, 2013 at 5:00 pm
Being that it’s an online course, I HAVE read the lesson for the second assignment. I wasn’t going to. I tried to resist. But as it turned out, it said exactly what I knew it would anyway.
😛
But you’re right. I’ll probably just end up writing it and worrying about the second assignment when it happens.
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October 13, 2013 at 4:37 pm
Or was it the voice you wanted to keep and change your style? Do I sound confused?
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October 13, 2013 at 4:44 pm
Haha! In this case they consider a writer’s style as his own unique voice. So it’s really one in the same.
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October 13, 2013 at 4:48 pm
I gotcha…I was thinking more in terms of the character’s voice. I try to give all my novel characters their own unique voice. It is different from my own writing voice. I have been told that I have a “powerful voice”, but I don’t know what that means really. I hope it isn’t a nice way to say “Pushy”. There is still so much for me to learn.
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October 13, 2013 at 4:52 pm
A strong voice usually means that it’s easily recognizable. Think James Earl Jones. 🙂
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October 13, 2013 at 4:34 pm
Everyone has a style, even if they are not experienced. Style also changes and develops. Possibly write it as you would anyway, and then improve it according to the comments.
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October 13, 2013 at 4:42 pm
That’s what confuses me. They want me to be able to ADD my style into the second assignment. How do you write without your style? I’m guessing in the end, that’s probably all I’ll be able to do is just fix whatever she comments on, and hope for the best.
Thanks for the comment 🙂
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October 13, 2013 at 4:46 pm
Good luck. Hope you will let us know how it goes.
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October 13, 2013 at 4:53 pm
Thanks! I will 🙂
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October 13, 2013 at 4:33 pm
Try writing in the voice of the opposite sex, or a stereotypical character. We don’t always agree with stereotypes, but they exists for a reason. Or use another dialect. You will keep your own writing style, but will change your voice.
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October 13, 2013 at 4:40 pm
I do that anyway, often in my dialogue. I suppose if I’m writing first person though, I could give the whole thing that feel. Interesting idea, thanks SK. 🙂
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October 13, 2013 at 4:32 pm
The best thing to do would be to write like you have always written, but with the added attributes of writing that you have come to learn. That is what I think.
All the best… 🙂
-HA
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October 13, 2013 at 4:38 pm
…so just really pour it on then. That might be good advice. Thanks, HA. 🙂
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October 13, 2013 at 5:04 pm
🙂
Now I am following your writing blog as well… will look forward to your creations. 🙂
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October 13, 2013 at 5:05 pm
Thank you. 🙂 I’ll be sure to post the results of my Short Story course there!
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October 13, 2013 at 5:06 pm
That will be cool. Hope you are doing well.
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October 13, 2013 at 5:11 pm
I am, thank you. Hope you are too!
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October 13, 2013 at 5:13 pm
I am doing alright. Thanks.
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October 13, 2013 at 5:14 pm
🙂
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October 15, 2013 at 12:02 am
I agree with all of the readers who advise you to write as you do.
Improvement should be judged from where you start, not where the course starts.
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October 15, 2013 at 8:36 am
That’s an excellent point! Thank you for that, Joey. 🙂
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