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A Minor Dilemma concerning my Short Story Course

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A first world problem has arisen. It was bound to happen. Because I have some experience in writing short stories, I’m kinda ahead of the class. We’re learning, at the moment, terminology such as character, setting, conflict, theme, point of view, and narrative unity. Not to toot my own horn, but most of this stuff I already manage without thinking about it.

So our first major assignment is to write a first draft of a short story. We’ll be marked on the above points. Fine, no problem so far. I am, however, having a problem with the second major assignment. Why, you ask? Because we have yet to learn about ‘style.’ In the second assignment we must fix what the professor tells us we need fixing – which is the first half of the mark – but then we need to apply to our story what we have yet to learn about style and writing in our own voice. The problem is, I don’t know how to write, not using my own voice and style in the first place, so that I have something to be marked.

I’ve thought about trying to write the first draft in someone else’s style, but I know I’ll be so unhappy with it I won’t be able to hand it in.

What to do…what to do…?

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Author: Linda G. Hill

There's a writer in here, clawing her way out.

49 thoughts on “A Minor Dilemma concerning my Short Story Course

  1. treyzguy's avatar

    I have NO IDEA what you’re talking about. I just bribed my teachers or threatened to beat them up. LOL!!
    I know nothing about structures, style, conflicts, etc., But i can tell you this: Write what you think. Make yourself laugh or cry while you write, and it will be felt by your readers.
    Your style should be….yours

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      I don’t know how well that would work, threatening to beat up my professor. I don’t even know what town she lives in, let alone where she works from. It’s an online course! haha
      Again, Trey, you’re right. You can’t touch your readers if you don’t feel it yourself.

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  2. John W. Howell's avatar

    Sad that you have to be perplexed in trying to figure a strategy for grades. I would give it your best shot and then work the next step.

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      It does seem a little sad, doesn’t it? Then again, if I didn’t know what was coming, I wouldn’t be going through this. 😛
      That’s probably the best idea. Thanks for your input, John 🙂

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  3. tjtherien's avatar

    sorry Linda had to chuckle a little when I read this… I could imagine your teacher having fits with me… seeing as I only write one draft to begin with… I would say just write like you write and deal with the second assignment when it’s time to…

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  4. Bradley Corbett's avatar

    Okay I think I got this figured out, I didn’t understand at first so I had to read it a couple of times and the comments helped. I think you’re being too meta, in D&D we call it meta gaming. If I understand this correctly the idea is to write a short story but it is a rough draft, so no edits (except for grammar possibly) even if that annoys you
    (it would annoy me).

    The professor wants to see your raw work and then from there the professor will go through and mark up things that he/she thinks is your style and areas where you perhaps strayed from your style. These two assignments are not about the story at all but about taking feedback, how to apply it and how other people might see your style differently than you do.

    Hope I made sense, lol. It actually sounds like some good assignments.

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      As I just commented to Charles, it’s going to be tough not to correct everything from the beginning.

      Thinking about it this way, it will be interesting. I need to make sure it’s not perfect to start with, but then again I can’t stray too far or I won’t get the marks I need.

      I’ll let you know how it goes. 🙂

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  5. Charles Yallowitz's avatar

    Write the way you always write. To do otherwise might make you appear messy and lead you on the path to a style you don’t like.

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  6. TamrahJo's avatar

    Write it – submit it – listen to the feedback – throw a Mozart-like temper exclaiming your work is perfection – refuse to change a single note – –

    Not that this is good advice – but it IS an option – and what is life without options?

    😀

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  7. Paul Davis's avatar

    I always hated style. What exactly is it? I get the rest (maybe a little fuzzy on narrative unity), but style was always a little strange to me. Is it voice? Hope you’re having fun in the class! Those beginning parts really seem like a “beginner’s guide to writing.”

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      It really is a beginners course in many ways, but it was necessary for me to take it to get my certificate. It is fun – it’s a challenge, albeit for the wrong reasons. 😛
      Style is how you discern one writer from another. Almost like an accent. You can put one on, but it won’t feel natural. If you think of it this way, it is your voice. In essence, it’s the way you speak when you write.

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  8. Bruce Goodman's avatar

    I agree with howanxious. Just write the jolly thing the way you always do. You don’t know yet what demands the professor is going to make exactly regarding “style” because he hasn’t told you yet. You don’t have to give the results of a scientific experiment BEFORE the experiment. Same for this: just do the first assignment and worry about the second assignment when it happens.

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      Being that it’s an online course, I HAVE read the lesson for the second assignment. I wasn’t going to. I tried to resist. But as it turned out, it said exactly what I knew it would anyway.
      😛
      But you’re right. I’ll probably just end up writing it and worrying about the second assignment when it happens.

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  9. S.K. Nicholls's avatar

    Or was it the voice you wanted to keep and change your style? Do I sound confused?

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      Haha! In this case they consider a writer’s style as his own unique voice. So it’s really one in the same.

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      • S.K. Nicholls's avatar

        I gotcha…I was thinking more in terms of the character’s voice. I try to give all my novel characters their own unique voice. It is different from my own writing voice. I have been told that I have a “powerful voice”, but I don’t know what that means really. I hope it isn’t a nice way to say “Pushy”. There is still so much for me to learn.

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  10. notewords's avatar

    Everyone has a style, even if they are not experienced. Style also changes and develops. Possibly write it as you would anyway, and then improve it according to the comments.

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  11. S.K. Nicholls's avatar

    Try writing in the voice of the opposite sex, or a stereotypical character. We don’t always agree with stereotypes, but they exists for a reason. Or use another dialect. You will keep your own writing style, but will change your voice.

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  12. anmol's avatar

    The best thing to do would be to write like you have always written, but with the added attributes of writing that you have come to learn. That is what I think.
    All the best… 🙂
    -HA

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