Life in progress

My Child

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There is a seriousness in your bones, deep below your happy exterior. Your laughter flakes off you like dried rose petals; it falls all around, coating everyone with your outermost joy.

Does it matter? No. Not to those who you meet in the street, or those you entertain. They feel blessed to be within your circumference of notice.

But to me you are an enigma. So fragile, and yet so strong.

And unlike those who are lucky enough to feel the warmth radiating from your presence for but a moment, I would die a thousand deaths without you.

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Author: Linda G. Hill

There's a writer in here, clawing her way out.

12 thoughts on “My Child

  1. lorriebowden's avatar

    So beautifully written…so powerful. Thank you!

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  2. Jenni's avatar

    such love for you child – it’s in every letter of that post.

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  3. The Pick Man's avatar

    Linda,

    Thank you. The writer you describe as ‘clawing her way out’ has, with this post, succeeded in conveying powerful feelings beyond the words that you have used to write it.

    A quotation from Virginia Satir come to mind.

    “Feelings of worth can flourish only in an atmosphere where individual differences are appreciated, mistakes are tolerated, communication is open, and rules are flexible – the kind of atmosphere that is found in a nurturing family.”

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