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S is for … Survey – Fictional Characters

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The first arguably most difficult thing about creating characters, is avoiding writing about yourself. This argument is based on the fact that you know no one better. Your experiences, tastes, and even your most used expressions are bound to creep in – sometimes you don’t even realize it.

The second arguably most difficult thing about creating characters is making them believable. It’s easy to write a one-dimensional character. So we write back stories, which may or may not show up in the final cut. But how detailed are those back stories? And how rounded do they make your characters?

The difficulty I find in writing a back story is that it tends to be about the big stuff. When I’m writing one, I’m looking for what motivates my characters to do what they do. Because a character with no motivation is the worst kind of cookie-cutter character. So I go back to their childhoods to discover what made them who they are. What are the huge events that shaped them into the person my readers will see when I plop them down in my story and ask them to react?

It’s not just the big things that shape who we are in real life though, is it? It might be where we were when someone else’s big event happened. It might be a piece of music we heard. Any number of trivial things make us who we are. And it’s those little things that make people care about us. Truly care. Which is another MAJOR if not the most MAJOR thing in keeping a reader reading our story.

With this in mind, I came up with an idea. What about those stupid surveys you see all over facebook and the like, which teenagers love to fill out? I looked one up. My mind was blown. This is only one of thousands: https://www.facebook.com/note.php?note_id=50193333157 so if you don’t like the questions here, google “100 question survey facebook.” If I answered only a third of the questions on this survey, from the perspective of my characters when they were teenagers, I would know everything I could possibly want to know in order to create the best characters I can come up with. Because the problem with writing just a back story, is the lack of spontaneously coming up with your characters quirks, opinions, and thoughts. Why? Again, because your own seep in.

As soon as I have the time, I will take this survey for at least four of my novel’s characters–two main, and two supporting. I honestly believe this is the golden key to rounding out their lives, and making my readers–and myself–care about them and what happens to them.

Do it. And really put some thought into it. Remember what it was like to be a teenager, when all of these questions mattered. Then let your character’s experiences seep in to your story and not your own. I can almost guarantee that it will give you a better story.

 

Stranger things have happened! Or have they? Click here to go to my fiction blog and see: http://lindaghillfiction.wordpress.com/2014/04/22/s-is-for-serendipity/

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Author: Linda G. Hill

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14 thoughts on “S is for … Survey – Fictional Characters

  1. lindacovella's avatar

    The survey is such a good idea. I’m going to give it a try. 🙂

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  2. LiveLoved's avatar

    What a great idea!! I would have never thought about using a survey to flesh out characters. You are so clever!

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  3. susan's avatar

    We had to do them in screen writing class. Everything from needs vs wants to how they looked, their mannerisms and what kind of food they ate. It’s a great exercise but I admit I don’t do them as much as I ought to

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  4. John Holton's avatar

    What if your character *is* a teenager? Seriously, this will help figure him out.

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  5. kristin's avatar

    Sounds like a good character building idea. I don’t really like the surveys but maybe I could “steal” other peoples results.

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    • Linda G. Hill's avatar

      There’s a good idea! I can’t stand surveys either, to be honest. I never do them for myself. But they can ask some very pertinent questions here and there, for character building. 🙂

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  6. Heathen Morgan's avatar

    Almost all of my characters end up being too ‘me’, but I’ve tried to address this in later years by purposely picking oppositional protagonists. I’ve always loved filling in character surveys, ever since I was a little girl, for my imaginary friends. Haha.

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  7. vicbriggs's avatar

    Great advice, Linda and a very interesting way of approaching the backstory. Will certainly give it a try. Thank you for sharing.

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