There are many writers out there who craft their stories based on a “what if” situation. They will come up with a scenario, such as “what if a meteor hit the earth?” or “what if a guy goes to the store and finds all the cars in the parking lot stacked on top of each other?”
These two scenarios may sound very similar, but they’re not. Yes, both start with the same three words, but the difference is this: the first revolves around a plot. The plot has yet to be populated by humans (assuming there are humans left alive after the meteor hit). The second scenario already has a human in it. Here may be the difference between a plot-driven story and a character-driven one.
For me, populating a story that contains a story first (aforementioned meteor crashing down) is near impossible. I can’t wrap my head around a crowd of people who have been plunked down in the middle of a situation. But give me a person to work with first, and I’m off and running. What any ONE person would do in a strange situation is fairly unique to that one person. That, to me, gives a story its excitement and its hook, if you will.
This whole topic came about when I started to think about how difficult it is for me to write a short story. Given a plot, I may be able to bang out a few words. But when I get my head wrapped around a character I find it hard to let go after just a few hundred words. I get attached to my characters very easily, and once I have them in my head I don’t just want to tell a bit of their story, I want to tell it all. Before I know it, I’m well on my way into a novel.
When I first began writing, I belonged to a Yahoo group in which a bunch of writers developed characters who not only interacted with one another, they told each other stories of their lives before they met one another. Quite like anyone would in real life. So I’m thinking about writing a character on my fiction blog rather than attempting and consistently failing to write short stories. Just a thought at the moment.
The character-driven story is a subject very dear to my heart. My characters become almost like family to me, much as the characters do in some of the novels I read. Especially the ones I’m sad to put down when they’re finished.
I’d like to hear from the writers out there – do you write character-driven or plot-driven stories? Have you ever ventured out of your comfort zone and tried the other one?
And from the readers – have you ever become attached to a character that was so well written, you never wanted their story to end?
October 2, 2014 at 4:18 pm
Confession: I don’t like to read about the writing process. (Everyone gasps)
That being said, I love this post, and I relate to it completely. I always start with a character, then a setting, then I leak some words and see where it’s going. Yes, I love my characters. I have never begun a story based on an event. I’d say my favorite books are character rich and plot thin. A series of events happen, sure, but never as simple as stating “Oh it’s a story about a guy who discovers a parking lot where the cars are all stacked up.”
LOVE this post 😀
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October 3, 2014 at 2:50 pm
*gasp!*
Haha! Thanks, Joey. 😀 I’m the same, which is why I ended up with a 214K word novel. There’s just no end of things that can happen to them!
Thanks for the wonderful comment!
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October 1, 2014 at 5:07 pm
Reblogged this on Manuscript. Head. Drawer. and commented:
I am and always have been a character-driven writer, and I love it. It’s like a drug in my system. I have to keep a tight rein on it, though, because in not wanting their story to end I’ll go right past where it should stop. 🙂 I do hope to at least once try my hand with a plot-driven story.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:47 pm
Some characters are hard to let go of! *she says as she writes her sequel…*
😉
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October 1, 2014 at 4:02 pm
Personally, I think plot-driven stories are doomed to fall flat. The audience comes to a story through the characters. If there’s no “in” for the audience through good, solid characters (and of course I don’t necessarily mean “good” characters), they won’t care about the meteor crashing into the planet, because it doesn’t affect them. Also, to be fair, *most* of the action in a story should come from the things that the characters themselves do (the “meteor crashing to earth” story should be only a little about the meteor and much more about the people who try to stop it or try to help recover from it, for example), so even stories that are plot-driven ultimately end up being character driven anyway.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:41 pm
You’ve got me trying to think of a plot-driven story that worked… Nope. (It might not seem like it, but I did sit for several minutes staring out the window trying to remember one.) Oh! How about some of the slasher films where everybody dies?
Okay, point taken. 😉
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October 1, 2014 at 8:11 am
My stories are so short that calling them stories may actually be wrong. I don’t know what banner mine would come under to be honest.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:31 pm
Is there a link to your favourite one?
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October 3, 2014 at 3:24 pm
My favourite longer ones are, I have shorter ones but am sorting out my tags and cannot find them quickly atm.
http://cognitivereflection.wordpress.com/2013/05/27/house/
http://cognitivereflection.wordpress.com/2013/06/12/the-shelter/
http://cognitivereflection.wordpress.com/2013/03/18/the-beach/
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October 3, 2014 at 3:27 pm
Thanks! 😀
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October 1, 2014 at 7:44 am
I’m not a writer but I enjoy the character of Alex Cooper in Linda Fairstein’s mysteries.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:30 pm
Sounds like something I’ll need to look up! Thanks, Paul 🙂
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October 1, 2014 at 12:01 am
Quite a number of years ago (maybe 60) I read a short story about a young boy who was left alone after a world wide disaster. I can’t remember the details or even the title for sure, but I think it was “By the Waters of Babylon.”
Anyway, reflecting on what few details I remember, it seems to me that if there were two characters in such a story, the author could not only focus on “reconstruction and survival” but also on character if the conflict had to do with ethics or morals of one or both.
Now I want to go back and try to find that story and see how the plot might be changed. 😉
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October 3, 2014 at 2:29 pm
Characters can certainly add to the richness of a story in that way. 🙂 Thanks very much for the comment, Beth. I hope you’re able to find the story again!
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September 30, 2014 at 11:55 pm
Great post! I’m not a published author, but I am trying to sell a novel. Therefore give whatever weight you want to what I’m commenting on.
Since I’m back at trying to finish a fantasy novel, I post fiction every other Sunday now. I’ve dabbled in both types of stories. Here is one that is an example of a short plot-driven story, and here is an example of a short character-driven story. Each type has its own strengths and weaknesses, but generally for novel writing I like character-driven stories because they keep the attention of readers longer.
What happens in a book matters, but the meaning of what is happening is what people remember.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:24 pm
Oooh, I like that last line! It’s so true! Thanks for the links – I’ll come and check them out. 😀
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September 30, 2014 at 10:25 pm
For me I write is character driven stories, dialogue is my best friend in stories. I love using it to portray my character in a certain way. The most I have done to leave that comfort zone is doing some stories in third person, I prefer first person to be honest. I have actually been working on a nice little amateur novel that I think once finished will have some hell of potential in it as a published piece.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:22 pm
I can see that happening, since reading your fiction. 🙂 It’s good to play around with perspectives too. And I agree, good dialogue can really give a story its atmosphere. Thanks for adding YOUR perspective, Wes. 🙂
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September 30, 2014 at 10:15 pm
My natural proclivity is to start with the characters, like you. I’ve tried to balance that out with plot-driven stories, because if I get too attached to my characters, I tend to forget I have a story to tell (I have a WIP right now that proves that).
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October 3, 2014 at 2:19 pm
Gotta keep ’em on the straight and narrow, Leigh! Haha! Thanks for chiming in 😀
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September 30, 2014 at 9:42 pm
Take what I’m about to say with a grain of salt, since I’m not an author and have never had anything published other than a few professional articles about the industry in which I work. That said, however, I have started a few “novels” and they’re very definitely character driven. And that is my tragic flaw. I develop these lovely, nuanced, rich characters (he says in all humility) and then I have no idea what to do with them. I suffer from plot deficiency disorder. One of these days, I should try a plot driven story, and, once I have a plot outlined, with a beginning, a middle, and an end…sort of a roadmap, then, perhaps I can fill it with my lovely, nuanced, rich characters. Or not.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:18 pm
If characters are already your strength then maybe trying it the other way around is just the thing you need. 🙂 I smell a bestseller already!
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October 3, 2014 at 3:06 pm
You smell a best seller? You must be spending too much time reading in the bathroom.
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October 3, 2014 at 3:28 pm
Hahahaha! Funny guy.
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September 30, 2014 at 9:35 pm
Oh yes, it’s all about the characters for me, both in reading and writing.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:16 pm
Me too! Thanks for your comment, IB. 🙂
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September 30, 2014 at 9:29 pm
As a reader it’s almost necessary for me to fall in love with the characters. If I don’t then I won’t care what happens to them no matter how well the story is written.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:15 pm
Yep, I agree – I’m the same way. Thanks for the comment, Bella. 🙂
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September 30, 2014 at 9:10 pm
Good question. Not sure how to answer it. There are times that I come up with a basic story like ‘what if a town is turned to stone by a demon’ and then characters take over the process. So I think it shifts between the two until it locks in as a story with deep characters. Maybe it’s safest to say that I have the two energize and carry each other.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:14 pm
Good answer, Charles! 😉 I think the “deep characters” is the most important part, personally. But that’s just me.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:25 pm
I mostly agree. Deep characters in a deep world would be the best since I think they’d work off each other. Hard to pull that off though.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:27 pm
Yeah, unfortunately we can’t all be JRR Tolkien. 😛
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October 3, 2014 at 2:30 pm
You know, I’m not sure how deep his characters where. At least all of them. Legolas seems to be simply ‘there’ when I reread it. Maybe I’m just annoyed that he Benjamin Buttoned into ‘The Hobbit’ movies.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:33 pm
He did? I haven’t seen any of them yet. Been meaning to though.
It’s true, only some of his characters were deep, but the story was so well-populated that you couldn’t expect too much. I absolutely loved Strider.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:40 pm
I saw ‘Desolation of Smaug’ last weekend and Legolas had a bigger role than in the big. For the first thing, he wasn’t in the book. He also had more lines in the movie than he had in the original trilogy. I think the thing that threw me is that you could tell that Orlando Bloom is older, but this movie is supposed to be a prequel. Honestly, I think Jackson curb-stomped his continuity unless you decide that his trilogies are unconnected.
Aragorn was great. Though, my favorite has always been Samwise.
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October 3, 2014 at 2:53 pm
Ugh. If it goes that far astray from the book I don’t know if I want to see it anymore. 😛
Sam’s great too!
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October 3, 2014 at 2:59 pm
Well, it’s a single book turned into a trilogy. It’s a visual spectacle to be sure, but it definitely goes in its own direction.
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October 3, 2014 at 3:28 pm
I hate it when that happens. 😛
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