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#JusJoJan prompt the 14th – “Neighbor”


(FICTION) (This is Part 2. Part 1 of this story can be found here.)

When the Smith family—Mr. & Mrs. Smith Sr., Mr. & Mrs. Smith, and little Bobby and Susie Smith—moved into their dream home in the prettiest part of town, they began renovations immediately. Bobby and Susie wanted a pool, so Mr. Smith Sr. splurged and paid for it. They all wanted a fire pit for the fall so they could sit around it on weekends and sing Kumbaya.

During the course of their upgrades, the Smiths met and made friends with the neighbors, all but the lady who lived alone next door. They were told to stay away from the woman because, it was rumored, she was a witch. But the Smiths, being a practical family, put it down to superstition and resolved to knock at her door at Christmas with an upbeat, friendly song.

They were quite delighted when, right in the middle of Jingle Bells, the lady opened her creaky front door and handed them all a steaming cup of hot chocolate. She bid them cheers but when they all took a sip, she shut the door, leaving them standing outside with her fine china cups.

“That was odd,” Mr. Smith commented.

“Indeed it was,” Mr. Smith Sr. replied.

“Do you think we should build her a snowman?” asked little Bobby Smith.

“I think that’s a wonderful idea,” exclaimed Mrs. Smith, always the enthusiastic one.

So the six assorted Smiths drank their hot chocolate, placed the cups gently on a table beside the door, and made their way to their neighbor’s side yard. And there they stayed.

(To be continued.)

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Author: Linda G. Hill

There's a writer in here, clawing her way out.

36 thoughts on “#JusJoJan prompt the 14th – “Neighbor”

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  4. What a fun little tale. I can’t wait to read more!


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  22. Very well done, Linda. We have a few houses around here that give me the willies and one that our dog refused to walk past. Maybe there’s more than I want to know going on in there.

    I didn’t get a notice from WP today, and I don’t see my pingback (yet) so I’m leaving a link –

    Take care.

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  26. I meant with the Snow Carolers 💜💜

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  27. I love this Linda it’s a little bit spooky … Lol I went in the same vein ! 💜💜💜

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  28. Great story Linda! Really nicely done! Xx

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