Life in progress

185. Scenes from the Second Seat on the Right


Sunday, March 4th, 1:00pm
Oliver (and Zoey)


Oliver sits at the window. Zoey takes the seat beside him.

Oliver: Forty-three, forty-four, forty-five.

The bus stops at a traffic light and Oliver stops counting.

Oliver: (to Zoey) I’m counting street lights.

Zoey: Oh.

Oliver: (as the bus starts again) Forty-six, forty-seven, forty-eight, forty-nine, fifty, fifty-one, fifty-two.

The bus stops to pick up a passenger and Oliver stops counting.

Zoey: Why are you counting street lights?

Oliver: Because I have to go back the other way when it’s dark, and I need to know when to get off.

Zoey: What if one of the street lights is out?

Oliver stares at her.

Zoey: You might not see it.

The bus starts up again.

Oliver: (panicked) Where was I? Quick!

Zoey: You counted fifty-two.

Oliver: Fifty-three, fifty-four, fifty-five …


Next stop: Monday, March 5th, 6:00pm

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Author: Linda G. Hill

There's a writer in here, clawing her way out.

4 thoughts on “185. Scenes from the Second Seat on the Right

  1. Funny stuff, Linda. This brings back memories of when I had to do twice-a-week light checks on the bridge when I was on Swing shift.

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  2. so detailed, easy to read and enjoy the message,,,Bravo

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