Life in progress

2. Scenes from the Second Seat on the Right


Note: Strong language

Saturday, September 2nd, 3:00pm
Andrea and Lacey


Andrea: So, she told me she’s, like, so skinny and when I get there? It’s like, who is this fat chick?

Lacey: Don’t you just hate it when people do that? They tell you one thing online …

Andrea: … and then I know! You find out they’re, like, nothing like they said they were going to be.

Lacey: It’s, like, remember that guy …

Andrea: Oh shit, yeah! That guy who told Billy he was straight and then …

Lacey: No, that other guy …

Andrea: Oh, the one who Martina met in the park? The one who, like, showed up with all this suit of armor and shit?

Lacey: Yeah, that one. Didn’t he …

Andrea: (laughs) Oh yeah, that’s right. He had to go to the bathroom and … (looks across the aisle at a middle aged man) What the fuck are you looking at?

Andrea sits back in her seat and pulls at the gum in her mouth, stretching it.

Andrea: (quietly to Lacey) Do you believe people these days? Jeez!


Next stop: Sunday, September 3rd, 1:00pm

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Author: Linda G. Hill

There's a writer in here, clawing her way out.

14 thoughts on “2. Scenes from the Second Seat on the Right

  1. Quite, like um these characters, good people watching fodder these two. Pulls chewing gum double tug. Heeehe!


  2. Loevely.! You’re very at dialogues 😊


  3. I remember young girls such as those went to China for summer school. When they spoke with an interpreter, the interpreter didn’t know how to translate all the “like”!!!!!


  4. You had me at “strong language”….

    I like these girls👍🏼👍🏼


  5. Great dialogue, very natural. I can visualize those two teenage(?) girls.


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